JUICY GRAPES RIPE, WITH
THE SLICE OF KIWI AND FRESH
GREEN WATERMELON
TEMPER GOES HIGH, AS
SUMMER SOLSTICE ARRIVE
DAY OF SWEAT AND SWEAT
THE SHOWER OF RAIN
AND SKY GOES RED, IS THE WAY
CLASSIC SUMMER END.
written for : Haiku Heights
image courtesy : mulderfox.blogspot.in
i loved the way you ended your haiku, how summer ends.. you expressed it beautifully.. :)
ReplyDeletethanks jayanth :)
Deletenice haiku...3rd one is great... :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice progression through summer, beginning to end.
ReplyDeletethanks pattiken :)
DeleteYour special view of summer. Very nice haiku. I like "classic summer end"
ReplyDeleteThanks ellece :)
DeleteNice images of summer...from food to rain ~
ReplyDeleteI still prefer this though than snow anytime ~
thanks grace ... same here :)
DeleteBeautifully written Surbhi....Yeah...after 2 months of long burning heat...we look for that classic end...rain...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing :)
Thanks valli :)
Deleteadore the last haiku and pic...surreal.
ReplyDeleteThanks paige :)
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