too much of eagerness is negative, i feel. nice one though.
i wrote my haiku that way, for "eager" prompt. if it's not trouble, read mine here : 1)http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/careful-with-your-eagerness-haiku/ 2)http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/never-unscathed-haiku-2/
I rarely disagree with a poet, but I take exception to the assertion that "eager is negative." Without eagerness, I find that many of my students (for example) become sloths and learn little, if anything.
i like the goal
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verification makes it really hard to comment. you'd get more comments if you turned it off. it took me several times to get his to publish.
thanks zongrik :)
Deletetoo much of eagerness is negative, i feel.
ReplyDeletenice one though.
i wrote my haiku that way, for "eager" prompt.
if it's not trouble,
read mine here :
1)http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/careful-with-your-eagerness-haiku/
2)http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/never-unscathed-haiku-2/
exactly jayanth .. nd thanks :)
DeleteI rarely disagree with a poet, but I take exception to the assertion that "eager is negative." Without eagerness, I find that many of my students (for example) become sloths and learn little, if anything.
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thanks MMT, but i just put my point of view :)
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