Friday, 6 April 2012

FORGIVE



CRUNCH THE WAFFLE OF
STIGMA, SPREAD CHOCOLATE OF LOVE
FORGIVE AND FORGET


FORGIVE AND FORGET
THROW THE STONE OF BURDEN, OWE
HAPPINESS, SING BALLAD.






written for : Haiku heights
image courtesy : behappylifecoach.com
inspired by : Ramesh sood ji

http://www.oprah.com/spirit/8-Ways-to-Forgive-and-Forget

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23 comments:

  1. CYNOSURE6 April 2012 at 11:41

    i love chocolates... <3 <3 <3... ;)
    great Haiku...

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  2. Sri Valli6 April 2012 at 11:45

    Lovely haiku surbhi....felt as if I was singing while I read it...:)
    Thanks for sharing :)

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    1. Surbhi7 April 2012 at 10:58

      ha ha ha..pleasure is always mine ... thanks a lot :)

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  3. Ramesh Sood6 April 2012 at 11:46

    well done Surbhi..but for a Haiku be careful for syllables..check 2nd of first and 3rd of 2nd.. RS:)

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    1. Surbhi7 April 2012 at 10:56

      thanks for telling me sir .. i will take care of the syllables next time :) i m not finding the perfect words to match with these haiku now... :p will not give you u another chance to find any mistake ..bless me :)

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  4. Kajal6 April 2012 at 11:56

    Surbhi good one.. I was just mentioning to a Haiku to sabarjeet of Cynosure is Mused that Forving comes easily to me but I have to work on the forgetting bit. I seem to take a very long time to forget.:(

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    1. CYNOSURE6 April 2012 at 14:34

      @kajal...sorry to interrupt you here...but its "Sarabjeet"...not "sabarjeet"... :P :P
      actually many people do this mistake...and I love correcting them...and I caught you lady... :P :P

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    2. Surbhi7 April 2012 at 12:07

      its very easy for me to forget ... because when i forgive some1, i dont give another chance ;)

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  5. Ellecee6 April 2012 at 12:11

    To "forgive and forget" is so important. Thank you for the reminder in your haiku. Well done.

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  6. carol l mckenna6 April 2012 at 13:38

    Content wonderful ~ very visual ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

    ps ~ am always counting syllables ~ ^_^

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  7. Grace6 April 2012 at 14:47

    Forgive and forget are good messages.

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    1. Surbhi7 April 2012 at 12:14

      yes for me it's like "live and let them live" :P :)

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  8. Gemma Wiseman6 April 2012 at 16:18

    Forgetting does not necessarily automatically follow forgiving! They can be sparring partners!

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  9. Pranita6 April 2012 at 20:50

    Forgive n forget is one of the most debatable topics i guess.. I forgive n forget in no time.. But i ve heard this sayin -

    "The stupid neither forgive nor forget; the naïve forgive and forget; the wise forgive but do not forget."

    It keeps me wondering what's right!

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    1. Surbhi7 April 2012 at 12:23

      pranita same is with me :)and i think its alrite to forgive and forget for easy life :)

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  10. debu6 April 2012 at 23:53

    wisdom ...is manifest in a ballad...the song is embedded in nature and human lives entangled...stigma..may not be easy to cruch...and chocolate not easy to spread...the stone burden needs to be thrown away ....simple word.. but may take a life time to sing a true ballad... loved it

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  11. Chèvrefeuille7 April 2012 at 04:57

    Lovely haiku set.

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