BEAUTY
TRAVELLING BLUE MILES
TOUCHES EDGE,
TO AND FRO
MOTION, LEAVES OCEAN
CRYSTAL CLEAR,
HER OWN BOSS
DANGEROUS TEXTURE
OF NATURE.
P.S - I just tried to show three different faces of beautiful oceanic waves.
HAIKU 1 - Beautiful waves travel thousands of miles before reaching the edge, similarly, human being needs to struggle a lot before attaining the perfection and reach the goal.
HAIKU 2 - Waves come and go, it looks attractive but only because of this consistency we can see crystal clear ocean, similarly, if human being is working hard and is consistent, then his future will be crystal clear like ocean.
HAIKU 3 - Waves are their own boss, these blue shining sparkles can be one of the most dangerous when seen as witness.
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beautifully written...all 3 of them...
ReplyDeletefirst pic was damn awesome... :)
thanks cyno :)
DeleteBeautiful set Surbhi...I loved the second one :)
ReplyDeletethanks valli :)
DeleteI like all of this set - the second is my favorite. And the pictures are just right.
ReplyDeletethanks ellece :)
Deletea nice haiku set.
ReplyDeletethe second haiku, the way you express, it is unique. "to and fro motion, leaves ocean crystal clear". keen observer and thinker you are, i guess.
loved them. and the photos too.. great post.
regards,
jayanth
thanks jayanth :)
Deletebeauty travelling blue miles. touches the edge.. wow.
ReplyDelete:) :)
DeleteI loved them all.. after the first I would say:
ReplyDeleteTouches edge
and makes my feet wet;
dancing wave..
very nice addition ramesh ji ...thanks :)
DeleteVery nice... like evryone els, my personal fav is the second one too! :)
ReplyDeletethanks pranita :)
DeleteLovely haiku ~ awesome photo ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeletethanks carol .. namaste :)
DeleteThanks harpreet
ReplyDeleteThree great Haiku.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite was number 2 - loved the idea of the oceans motion cleansing all in its path.
thanks mjshorts :)
DeleteEnjoyed the rhythm of your "waves" set ~~ Nicely done. This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.
ReplyDeletethanks beccagivens :)
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