Saturday 7 April 2012

PLAY : A HAIKU !



MOONLIGHT SNEAK
OVER LAKE, PLAYS WITH
GENTLE TOUCH


GENTLE TOUCH
TINGLE AND MINGLE
TICKLE BLUE


TICKLED BLUE
SMILE WITH SHINE EVER,
FOREVER.





Written for : Haiku heights
Inspired by : Ramesh sood ji
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27 comments:

  1. Sankara Jayanth S7 April 2012 at 11:36

    beautiful... the haiku flows..
    the last one is amazing.
    nice one, Surbhi. :)

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  2. CYNOSURE7 April 2012 at 11:42

    beautiful Haiku... :)

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  3. Ramesh Sood7 April 2012 at 12:00

    I am happy..I find many of the friends picking up the style of cascading haiku...yes, it's evolving so well.. Beautiful..haiku all..

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  4. Ellecee7 April 2012 at 12:03

    Beautiful haiku and a beautiful picture. Thank you.

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  5. Anonymous7 April 2012 at 12:15

    that's gorgeous

    two playing senryu

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  6. debu7 April 2012 at 15:06

    the optimism oozing of the last line... touched me...thanks

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  7. Grace7 April 2012 at 15:37

    Very nice cascading form..gentle as your words ~

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  8. Chèvrefeuille7 April 2012 at 16:10

    Lovely set of haiku. I love the flow of this cascading haiku. You did very well on the prompt.

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  9. carol l mckenna7 April 2012 at 17:25

    lovely ~ sensuous and receptive ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  10. Maude Lynn7 April 2012 at 18:15

    Beautiful!

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  11. Tarang Sinha8 April 2012 at 02:25

    Lovely composition! especially the first one:)

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  12. Sri Valli8 April 2012 at 03:26

    A beautiful and lovely set Surbhi :)

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  13. Jeannette,8 April 2012 at 06:56

    the haiku and picture blended beautifully..

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  14. beccagivens8 April 2012 at 15:54

    Beautiful cascading Haiku ... nicely done!
    This is my Day 8 ~~ Waiting Their Turn.

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