Thursday 12 April 2012

WARMTH : A HAIKU !



FAILURE CAN HAPPEN,
BUT WARMTH OF MOTHER'S SOFT LAP
EFFORTLESS SUCCESS


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WARMTH OF YOUR INTENSE
RESPONSE AND LOVE, INSPIRE ME
TO LINGER AND LEARN.





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19 comments:

  1. CYNOSURE12 April 2012 at 11:36

    lovely set of Haiku...first one was so true... :)

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    1. CYNOSURE12 April 2012 at 11:52

      please check syllable count in 1st of 1st and 2nd of 2nd... :O

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    2. Surbhi12 April 2012 at 12:32

      thanks cyno :) i have made the corrections :)

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    3. CYNOSURE12 April 2012 at 15:22

      :)

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  2. Sankara Jayanth S12 April 2012 at 11:55

    great lines... First one is true.mother's lap..ah,bliss.

    and yes, responses help us learn. :)

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  3. Ellecee12 April 2012 at 18:41

    Both are so true. Well written haiku.

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  4. Pranita12 April 2012 at 21:10

    Very real.. ur Haiku! Reminded me of my mom... how i wish i could go get my head on those laps just now!

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  5. Surbhi13 April 2012 at 02:21

    Thanks loredana :)

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  6. PattiKen13 April 2012 at 07:56

    Both of these are beautiful. They are so gentle.

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  7. Sri Valli13 April 2012 at 08:47

    How true!..A beautiful dedication to all our mothers :)

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  8. PhilO♥13 April 2012 at 09:24

    A mother's love and warmth is never ending. Never ends :) Beautiful!

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  9. Tarang Sinha13 April 2012 at 10:03

    This is beautiful!:)

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