Wednesday 4 April 2012

WAVES



BEAUTY
TRAVELLING BLUE MILES
TOUCHES EDGE,




TO AND FRO
MOTION, LEAVES OCEAN
CRYSTAL CLEAR,




HER OWN BOSS
DANGEROUS TEXTURE
OF NATURE.


P.S - I just tried to show three different faces of beautiful oceanic waves.

HAIKU 1 - Beautiful waves travel thousands of miles before reaching the edge, similarly, human being needs to struggle a lot before attaining the perfection and reach the goal.

HAIKU 2 - Waves come and go, it looks attractive but only because of this consistency we can see crystal clear ocean, similarly, if human being is working hard and is consistent, then his future will be crystal clear like ocean.

HAIKU 3 - Waves are their own boss, these blue shining sparkles can be one of the most dangerous when seen as witness.






written for : Haiku heights
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21 comments:

  1. CYNOSURE4 April 2012 at 11:45

    beautifully written...all 3 of them...
    first pic was damn awesome... :)

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  2. Sri Valli4 April 2012 at 11:47

    Beautiful set Surbhi...I loved the second one :)

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  3. Ellecee4 April 2012 at 12:01

    I like all of this set - the second is my favorite. And the pictures are just right.

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  4. Anonymous4 April 2012 at 12:07

    a nice haiku set.
    the second haiku, the way you express, it is unique. "to and fro motion, leaves ocean crystal clear". keen observer and thinker you are, i guess.

    loved them. and the photos too.. great post.

    regards,
    jayanth

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  5. debu4 April 2012 at 12:11

    beauty travelling blue miles. touches the edge.. wow.

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  6. Ramesh Sood4 April 2012 at 12:15

    I loved them all.. after the first I would say:

    Touches edge
    and makes my feet wet;
    dancing wave..

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    1. Surbhi4 April 2012 at 22:22

      very nice addition ramesh ji ...thanks :)

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  7. Pranita4 April 2012 at 12:54

    Very nice... like evryone els, my personal fav is the second one too! :)

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  8. carol l mckenna4 April 2012 at 17:33

    Lovely haiku ~ awesome photo ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  9. Surbhi4 April 2012 at 22:20

    Thanks harpreet

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  10. Anonymous5 April 2012 at 09:38

    Three great Haiku.
    My favourite was number 2 - loved the idea of the oceans motion cleansing all in its path.

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  11. Anonymous5 April 2012 at 18:19

    Enjoyed the rhythm of your "waves" set ~~ Nicely done. This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

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